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BEFORE YOU COMMENT, PLEASE READ:

I've been talking to some fellow comic makers and we've been reviewing each other's comics and, not gonna lie, I didn't do too well. No, no, it wasn't a bad thing. you see I got marked for:

(1) Different size/length files
(2) Unclear timeline
(3) Rushed scenes
(4) Unclear settings/locations

We talked about it and they said to me, that if I ever wanted to publish this or make it better, then I'd have to re-do it and put more heart into it. So I decided to do so. I know I've been slacking on this comic, but to be honest coloring the pages sometimes makes me dread finishing it up, and this way, the pages/chapters take me sooooo little amount of time. So please, once again, bare with me on this transition.

PS: At least this way you'll see Nicholas' backstory

The story will be uploaded on MangaMagazine: www.mangamagazine.net/manga-an… but, of course, I will upload it here as well since this is mainly for you guys.

~Yoru
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Irani-nu's avatar
You might have heard this before but what you need above most is patience. The mistake many authors make is that they have an idea in their head, a particular scene that makes them excited and want to draw a comic or write a book. Unfortunately, when they start writing they realize their characters have to go though more before getting them to that big scene or big moment in their head so they end up rushing the scenes without really letting their characters grow or for the big moment to build up. Reading this second time around you're doing an excellent job with being patient with yourself and your characters. Keep up the awesome job!